PROHIBITED MATTER #8
$5.00 Editor Rod
Marsden PO
Box 19, Spit Junction NSW 2088, Australia
Rod Marsden's crime, horror and science fiction fanzine continues to
suffer from editorial incompetence. Reading it cover to cover is a gruelling
experience thanks to a procession of first-draft stories that scream out
for editing and revision. Even a basic courtesy such as right-justification
is denied these poor paginated souls. If there was a law against cruelty
to fiction, Prohibited Matter would get life without parole.
This is not to say the magazine has no audience or receives
no praise - quite the opposite. The Letters column dishes up six and a
half page's worth of encouragement, platitudes, and pats-on-the-back. Prohibited
Matter obviously has a loyal following among fans and fan writers,
many of whom are regular contributors. Fan fiction is still fiction, however,
subject to the same measures applied to any other book or periodical...
Science Fiction. Don Boyd opens this section with an article
on Paolo Solerio, a visionary architect semi-famous for designing elegant
and ecologically sensible cities. While the layouts are the anti-thesis
of the subject matter, Boyd's over-view provides enough details to inform
the clueless. A good start. 'The Stars Foretell' by Lyn McConchie is the
best fiction piece here, albeit written in her typically unfocused and
bone-dry manner. Steve Carter's social SF horror yarn 'No Man's Land' was
based on a comic book storyline and written in one day. Literally a first-draft,
this story fails to build its action toward a satisfying finish. The background,
concerning a social engineering experiment gone awry, is adequately described
but under-utilised. Saving the worst till last, '...And Died One Day' by
Boris Zelensky is a pulse-stopping, brain-fossilising science fiction story
about love between two terraformers. The dire standard of this work is
well demonstrated by this attempt at imagery:"A tarnished coin of the local
sun hung over the low ridge ready to give place in the sky to the stars."
Crime. 'Critters and Innards' by D. F. Lewis radically
redefines the crime genre by featuring a woman whose bodily organs assume
sentience and go their separate ways, like a much gorier sequel to Barker's
'The Body Politic'. Fun while it lasted. Geoff Jackson sustains the body-part
motif with 'Love is a Razor', one of the most coherent stories he's ever
done. Again, this is more horror than crime. Revenge is the theme of 'Tipping
the Scales' by Rod Marsden, a contrived story condemned further by the
ultra-ultra-ultra-bland delivery. 'What Do You Call a Predator of Predators?:
Chastity White' by Robert James Conlon makes 'Tipping the Scales' look
respectable, with its disjointed and utterly uninvolving narrative. Book-ending
the crime section are three articles: one about the Vaseline Hanson Immigration
debate by P. J. Roberts, one 'On Being Politically Incorrect' by Keith
Rex, and the other discussing 'The Dynamics of Rumour in the Work Place'.
What is the crime connection here? Please explain!
Horror. 'The Restaurant' by Rod Marsden must be what he
calls "avant-garde" story telling. A man trapped in the restaurant from
hell ends up in the oven. A weak attempt at surrealism, it lacks the strong
prose, sophistication and subtlety need-ed to make it effective. 'Devil
Woman of the Deep Part 2' by Don Boyd crushes the mind with its dull, meandering
plot, stupid character names, and Sherlock Holmes trappings. Passable monster
mayhem at the end. Barbara Custer's 'The Wrong Entree' begins with this
screamer: "Donald Weis cringed against the stairs, hugging himself and
shivering, while his bosses, Ewald and Dr. Tynan, chewed on Gilroy's right
leg." Her tale gives new meaning to the term corporate downsizing. Lastly
there is 'Life After Death' by R. G. Riel, who seems determined to make
up for the lack of rich and passionate prose by filling his story with
nothing else but. In the process he drowns the point of the story, the
action, and all sympathy for the character's tragic situation. Riel is
a promising writer who is too much in love with the sound of his own wordage.
In keeping with the avant-garde theme, vertigo-inducing
collages by Amanda Steele are plastered all through the magazine. Those
designed as illustrations sometimes look comical; see pages 21, 47 and
50. Also, Antoinette Rydyr's flat cover drawing of a fish-woman desperately
needs more rendering. Nice teeth, though.
Tons of unrewarded effort goes into each Prohibited Matter.
Unfortunately, quality and quality-control is sorely lacking. Five dollars
and five hours of reading time is a high price to pay. Keep your expectations
at the fan level and you won't be disappointed.
BLOODSONGS #8-9
$5.95 Ed:
Cynthia Ariel Conlin Implosion
Publishing PO Box 533653, Orlando, FL 32853, USA dave@implosion-mag.com
Brief comments: Bloodsongs now looks more professional - better
paper and printing. In Issue #8 the non-fiction still crucifies the fiction.
Highly professional pieces on Neil Gaiman from David Carroll and adolescent
horror fiction by Kyla Ward; both writers have improved since their Tablua
Rasa days. Of the fiction, 'Tears for Broken Toys' by Kirstyn McDermott
is the standout, although it was edited substantially and even "dumbed
down" by Implosion, all without the author's consent or knowledge. Inexcusable.
Contributors beware.
In issue nine 'The Freezing of Sarah' by Aurealis Award
winner Sean Williams is top dog in an uneven pack. Heavy metal and subculture
articles do not mix with horror fiction. With luck these will be syphoned
into Implosion and Bauer's new metal magazine Juggernaut. The review
section this time around was okay, if a little fanzine-ish. The Australian
content is dwindling. Not bad overall.
REEL WILD CINEMA #1-2
$3.00 Editor:
John Harrison 2
Glenbrae Court, Berwick VIC 3806, Australia
This is a true fanzine: it covers movies and topics already spotlighted
in zillions of other sources. That doesn't stop it from being personable,
neat, and ambitious enough to solicit interviews from trash film actors
and film makers. What Reel Wild Cinema lacks in originality is balanced
by its enthusiasm; I'm keen to see the next one. Look for it in Polyester
Books, Melbourne, or write to them.
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